Torment

Torment

I gave you my heart.
That was a first,
My start.
I set my loyalty,
On high,
But it only left,
Me to cry.
You were my hero,
My first friend,
I didn’t know how quickly,
That would all end.
I always had fear of,
Being a disappointment,
Not carrying my weight,
But I came to resent,
That you,
Would not let me fly.
You crafted my world,
Yet I slowly died.

9/6/23


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2 responses to “Torment”

  1. threewintryfriends Avatar

    I accidentally read the end, “yet would not let me die!” very difficult to confront loyalty and self respect, where the lines should begin and end. love this

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    1. Dana Avatar

      Thank you for your kind words. It’s not easy to express 💕

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